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Looking back at this essay, I realized how expressive I am when it comes to people of my own. My writing process wasn’t as bad as I thought it was going to be due to the fact that I picked a interesting topic to talk about. Talking about how I used to feel vs how I feel now made me feel free. I felt that I was showing what it’s like being a minority female. I was able to talk about how I used to believe that being white is better than being black. I only felt this way because I went to a majority white school and teachers would treat white students better than minority students like me.However, everything changed as I got older because I became more educated and woke. It made me love my people so much especially since we’re African Americans being oppressed by others. I used to really excluded so I would try to act like something I’m not. However, even though this was a great essay, I could’ve worked on my organization better so it’s more clear because I want people to understand how I feel and where I’m coming from. Out of all the papers I wrote in my lifetime, this was like the first paper I wrote ever to express how I feel without anyone judging me for how I feel. This paper showcases my learning because I am able to explain a lot and it demonstrates the improvement I made from when I was in high school.